Clash

by viraz vitalia   Feb 11, 2008


Two swords clash in battle
Mine and an unknown enemy
Unknown is powerful
Crushing blows and swift movements
I can barely defend
This style feels familiar
I think...
Wait...
Could it be...
A swift strike reveals the truth
It is...
I'm fighting myself
A struggle against myself
How can I win
They know all my moves
No way I can win
Maybe if I...
No...
Yes...
Uh!...
I lost...
Beaten at my own game
Beaten by myself

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  • 16 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I really like this.

    ok another tip (which even i have to take into account more often) puncuation can make or break the poem. punctuation can affect the flow, style, and emotion of the piece. i'll show u what i mean tomorrow in school.