Aww sad poem, but it's very well written
Good Job
And i agree with what you said below
5/5
=]

Great poem. I loved your word choice.

Talented, definitely. :]

Cayce xx

This was incredibly sad. I can relate to it. not in the exact same way of the way you hurt yourself. You were very good at describing everything.
5/5

This is really sad =[.. very powerful. i liked it 5/5

Sad sad poem, but a very good theme applied within it

Awwwwww.
Good job

Ok that was a great poem!! loved it

Very touching...I Like It

Very touching...I Like It

Aww, sad and touching...this poem is so ture too..i like it a lot..5/5

This is brilliant. excellent first line hun draws you write in and the second one is just as powerful. well done. think this is very true and you did a great job xx