When this happens in real life, it is a real tragedy. You have depicted what happens very good, and even though you have not personally experienced it, you put the emotions into the poem. Great job/ 5/5

Well gOod its n't a persOnal xperIEnce..but actually it do occur in dis wOrld wid loadz of ppl..n loadz ov galz been raped juz cOz ov lust..y kan't v dO sumthn'abt it??ne'vy u'av dOne d writing quite well..

Wow...I don't know what to say.This was a really good write.The word choice was basic but fit it well.The flow was good.Great write.5/5

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This is the first tale ive heard like this that ended the right way.. the way it should end, i love your floetry in this poem 5/5

That was an outstadning poem. 5/5 doesn't even begin to cover it. The rhyme scheme (did I spell that right?) was amazing and the feelings seemed so real! I don't understand how you did it but it's awsome. ;) Definately one of the best poems I've ever read.

I felt like I was the girl in the poem and it kept me entranced. GREAT WORK!

Wow, all i can say is wow! This is amazing writing. I hope this isn't true but if it is i am terribly sorry, at least something good came out of it. I really like the line "every flinch, every tear" great work! 5/5

Wow i loved this one.....i said something about tempo on a differnt poem of your......this poems tempo was very smooth and easy to read....
i loved the last line
5/5 very nice!!!! im addin to me favs =]

Wow!! taht was really strong. great poem

Wow!...really good..i love how at the end u capitalized not giving it that stronger emotion to it....it was really good!.
Aly

Wow this is touching. i really enjoyed the emotion of it. this is the first one of your iv read but i already love your style

Your ability at writing in this style is obvious and well done. One would presume this is from experience with the discriptive narrative. Your readers thoughts must do a double take when going from the next to last stanza to the last, mine did. I thought he was shot dead but no.

This was a really good one and sad.. but it was good the wording and everything

Is this true...?...it was gud

Well damn, I don't know what else to. Great poem though. 5/5