I disagree with you. It is a poem, just a different form than most people are used to. It captures feeling, uses some figurative speech, and makes the reader feel what you feel. Rock on!

Toni

Holy smokes...

I clicked on your profile so I could thank you for the message you left me. And then I got ahold of this...

Wow.

This is unlike anything I've ever read before. I love the way you write... The word choice is perfect and makes whoever reads it feel EXACTLY as you do. It takes a lot of talent to do that.

Keep writing!!