Wow, youre poetry is alot more "mature" than most of the other people on this site (including mine).... Your use of vocabulary is heaps good......
Noice, noice. 5/5

AWWWW, this is so sweet and to answer all those questions, I could do all of that, but why do all those things and not have him feel the say way as you (I) do. I can live in the moment and forget the pain, but will he do the same. I could write forever about this one. All in all this is an awesome poem. Very thought provoking. Excellent

AWWWW, this is so sweet and to answer all those questions, I could do all of that, but why do all those things and not have him feel the say way as you (I) do. I can live in the moment and forget the pain, but will he do the same. I could write forever about this one. All in all this is an awesome poem. Very thought provoking. Excellent