This poem is so great so beautiful and touching

very sad poem indeed

keep writting

Thats such a sad poem, but i can relate becuase my life was like that last year. my favourite stanza is
"Her friends no longer love her
her boyfriend broke her heart
her family couldn't give a damn
her life keeps falling apart" it really shows how bad it is in a few simple words
the flow was excellent great job
btw im adding it to my favs
5/5

Really great poem.

Deep .
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She grabs a knife from the drawer
and stabs it in her heart
its the story of a lifetime
a new life now she'll start -
i really liked that stanza,
just really hits the reader.
[the part with the dog. i really wasn't expecting that. guess it was the drop of water that just made everything tip over.]
5/5