Don't tell me that I don't love you

by Lemma   Feb 14, 2008


Don't tell me I don't love you
Now listen, don't you dare
Don't ever tell me I don't love you
Or that I never cared.
Don't tell me that you hate me,
I've heard it all before,
Don't tell me you won't be crying,
When I'm lying dead upon the floor.
Don't tell me that I wanted to do this,
Don't tell me I'm not trying my best,
Don't tell me that you're going to leave me,
Don't tell me we'll fail this test.
Now don't you dare go crying,
Now don't you dare be scared,
Now don't you dare be thinking,
That I've obviously never cared.
Don't tell me that I don't love you,
When all I can think of is you,
Don't tell me that you don't love me,
Just tell me that this isn't true.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    That's pretty much how I wrote it =)

    xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Benito

    This is a good poem. i like the concept of you using "dont tell me" .....it really makes the poem spark.

    i can imagine someone screaming these words as they cry. good job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    I really love it so much emotion i love the repetitions in this one, This was a very heartbreaking read , i can tlel this came striahgt from the heart Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    I really love it so much emotion i love the repetitions in this one, This was a very heartbreaking read , i can tlel this came striahgt from the heart Great Job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Emilline

    Wow, this is excelent! great job, i love the structure of this one! really great job! i love the topic of this one, very unique and original, never read anything like it before! but amazing job! Keep it up!

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