Far away love

by falln angel with broken wings   Feb 14, 2008


I have never kissed your sweet lips,
or held your sweet hand.
and yet in your arms is ware i wish to land.
across the ocean through the Sky's I'm away from you but me heart lies.
with you i am an open book for you too read,
my heart and hidden pages for yours in need.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Awwww! so cute! i have had so many long distance relationships so i know how this goes i loved the way you worded it absolutely perfect : ) 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    Great poem, I like the way it is worded ^.^ (As always) I'm sure david up there really likes it allot ^.^ But anyways I give it a 5/5 great job ^^

    :Holds up card that says "DEVAN IS ASOMENESS":

    XD

  • 16 years ago

    by JayJ

    This is a very well written poem! I love how it made me feel as though I am the one feeling that exact same emotion...great job!

    JayJ

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Ahh...Thanks baby...
    I know how you feel :(
    5/5

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