I love this poem.... uhm maybe you could title "he's just the same"....thats just a suggestion...

as for the poem it was flawless..i enjoyed reading it.5/5

Well... gr8888 job... i could feel the pain in between the lines. Enjoyed it soo much.
umm the title could be "behind his eyes...stands a lie"... just a suggestion u know...

Hey great poem. As for a title......Something like "Some things never change." The main idea is that this guy hasn't changed and he's still hurting you right? So I guess having something about change in the title would make sense. I'm rubbish at thinking up titles but I thought I'd give it a shot anyway =)

Beautiful, if very sad poem. Full of emotion.

5/5

Em xXx

MAN! That was amazing, the flow and rhyme were so good. But your wording was just perfect. The last line was soooo good!
*ME*