Hold This Poem To Your Heart.

by Crystal Gaze   Feb 15, 2008


Hold This Poem To Your Heart.
By: Paula .C.

Once a withering flower, I turned to you...
and was cradled in loving arms
Now I am your rose, bright and in full bloom
turning my head in the direction of your warmth
You are my Life.

When black clouds dominate the once clear sky
Rain falls in earnest with the tears falling from my eyes
the sun comes out and demolishes the storm
You are my Warmth.

A blanket of snow, falling crisp and cold on my battered soul left me frozen and dazed...
but you melted the ice that has entrapped my heart for so long
Taking a needle and thread you began to repair it with a loving gaze
You are my healing Sun.

As the sun shines on our joined hands,
and our hearts thump against our chest
I look up at you with adoring eyes
You are my Smile.

You are my Love, my Life, my Happiness
You stop the storms, repair my heart, and make me smile even through the darkest times
I love you, and to live without you would be...
IMPOSSIBLE.

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Written for my Valentine. My boyfriend was the sweetest, I love him so much, and hope he had as good a valentines day as he made mine<3

I love you so much Jake.
---Paulaxox

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  • 16 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Beautiful Elly!
    Truly beautiful.
    If only all love poems were like this.
    I just think you're so wonderfully talented, and skilled and just...AHHH! amazing!
    (but you know I think that, =D)
    It only I had one eighth of your talent.
    Keep writing, or I will have nothing constructive to read, heehee!
    VERY well done.
    Kat xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Miranda

    Beautiful.This is the sweetest,most amazing poem ever.You are a unique and fantastic writer .This poem was full of love and emotion.Your definatly getting better at writing love poems.
    Keep writing,
    Rado

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    AWW THIS POEM IS SO SWEET, YOUR VALENTINE
    IS SO LUCKY THIS POEM IS AWESOME I USUALLY DON'T LIKE READING LONG POEMS BUT THIS ONE KEPT ME INTERESTED, GREAT WRITE!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Your boyfriend should be proud to get such an amazing valentine!! i like the structure of this poem. it holds the rythem and flow within its grip making the poem read better. 5/5
    !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a real nice poem The images in it were well done and the flow was good I think it was scattered in thought but with time that will go away anyway a good job keep up the good work