Love the repetition of the word "dreams." I like the title as well, intrigued me. One little thing that bugged me was that the stanzas aren't all the same structure. The poem is great though and I can't see a way that it could be changed, I think it's just some of my obsessiveness coming out in me, I love symmetry haha. 5/5

Em xXx

Aww.. this was so sad/sweet. The flow was great. Your word choice was good.

Not only in reality, but also in our,
Dreams
^^I absolutely loved that line!

You're a good writer!

Keep writing!!
Cayce xx