Teen Love Tragedy

by MusicIsMyBoyfriendx3   Feb 15, 2008


These are actually (my song) lyrics....so bear with me

You don't feel the pain i feel inside
When i see you look in her eyes
You never see the pain you've caused
Cuz everything is just my fault
I'm the one who closed my eyes
So i couldn't realize
I'm the one who couldn't see
We're a Teen Love Tragedy..
(ohh ohh ohh)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    Nice words, very well expressed...

  • 16 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Sounds like a chorus to me. How about finishing it fully?

    Also, because it is a song, it is proper to write "(Lyrics)" next to your title.

    Sounds like a great song, seriously. Finish it. ^.^

    _[Sam]

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I like it... and can relate... <3 very nice job! 5/5

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