What do you do

by HidinVictim   Feb 15, 2008


What do you do
When the one you love
Has someone else
And the one your with
You wish you could love

I'm praying for an answer
Don't think it will come.
I'm praying for his arms
Now that I'm finally going numb.

I asked him to love me,
And i thought that he would,
If this is love
It doesn't feel so good.

These cuts on my wrist
Won't seem to go away,
These cuts on my wrist
Haunt me as i pray.

I'm sitting on my bed and,
Thoughts drift to him,
And how he reminds me
Of things we could have been

So what do i do?
Cause I'm still afraid
I'm hoping with his touch,
Thoughts of you will fade

Theres still songs
I just can't hear,
Theres just some smells
That bring me to tears.

Rejection my biggest fear,
Because of you
In my mind its smeared

Now he's calling it shy
But its really just fear
Scared of shedding
Just one more tear.

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    This was a very beautiful write. I would have to agree with Crystal Gaze when it comes to the flow though. It seems as if you were trying so hard to get the rhyme, that you interrupted the flow. But the voice was heard as I was reading, which is always good.
    Overall, great job.

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    I agree with Crystal Gaze. You did an amazing job with the voice in this poem. Though the flow was a little rough. I would say that you shouldn't focus so much on the rhyme, more on the emotion.
    But overall, great write.

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    The sincerity comes through in this piece, Love can be very painful and you showed that pain with your words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Over all, this was a beautiful poem. It seemed you were speaking words from your heart.Though the flow was a little choppy, and the rhymes seemed forced, this poem was still well written.

    Keep it up.
    --Elaine.

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