Revenge of The Heart

by HidinVictim   Feb 15, 2008


I told you its over
And that I won't wait
I told you I hate you
And that you were fake
I wanted a response
But I got an 'ok'
Now that im with him
I can see all your hate
Im wishing that you
Would have shown it before,
Before I let my heart
Fall and hit the floor,
But now hes here
And hes chasing away fears
But baby I kept
All those tears
All those pent up fears
I sealed them up tight
But now I think that I might
Put all my fears and all of my tears
In a bucket or tub
Sit you inside
And let you drown in your fright
This is revenge of the heart
And if you were smart
You would have thought
Before you tore it apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    AWW THIS IS SUCH A SAD POEM , I ALSO WOULD LIKE TO POINT OUT THAT THE TITLE OF YOUR POEM IS GREAT, ALSO LONGER THAN YOUR OTHER TWO I READ BUT THIS ONE IS ALSO A GOOD WRITE!!!...=]...5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    It's a good poem. I can actually feel the hate towards this man. Although, the flow was a bit rocky and the lines need a bit help. It's good though. I really liked it. Good job.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    It's a good poem. I can actually feel the hate towards this man. Although, the flow was a bit rocky and the lines need a bit help. It's good though. I really liked it. Good job.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveBird99

    Oh my gosh! I absolutely LOVED the metaphors you used in this poem like, " let you drown in your fright." Very descriptive too.

    I can really relate to this when it comes to my ex.

    Good job, keep writting!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    The flow and pace at the beginning of the poem are great but I felt like it lost it a little towards the end. I like the metaphor about putting the fears and tears in a tub and drowning him in them. Full of emotion and straight from the heart. Great.

    Em xXx

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