The hole that your love left me in

by deadly sun   Feb 16, 2008


Stuck in this hole, no one here but me
its so dark in here, no lights for me to see
i fumble over objects, in the darkness of my mind
i fumble to try and find you, but your the one thing i can't find
i call out your name, i call it in the dark abyss
and when you don't call back i fight the darkness with my fists
but all i hit is nothing, i can't drive back the black
and i won't be able to see again until i have you back

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    This is touching I love it keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizzie

    Wow. that's all i can say. that was an amazing poem. i love ur rhythum, i love ur style. it's definetly one of my faves now.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eman D

    Real stuff. A broken heart kinda is like bein left in the dark. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eman D

    Real stuff. A broken heart kinda is like bein left in the dark. 5/5.