I love it. The flow, the words, the way you have expressed it is just spot on. well done, amazing job.
5/5 & thank you vey much for your comment =)

Wow. This is just amazing! Very well written. its simple, but powerful. Your rhymes werent at all forced and i liked ur choice of wording. I have to say in SOME parts, the flow was slightly off, to me. But apart from that its really well written. 5/5

Thanks alot. I appreciate you commenting on my poems. sometimes there are not words that flow with the poem.