Conversation With My Medicated Angel

by HidinVictim   Feb 18, 2008


You asked me if you died today
What is it I'd say?
I said I had some words
But I wouldn't tell
You asked if it had an L
I told you yes it did
Then my heart fell
Cause wondering what you'd think
Was putting me through hell
You said you'd say the same
But the only thing
People say a lot of things
When they're going to extremes
So if we were laying there
Perfectly free
What is it you'd say to me?

My boyfriend takes this medicine that makes him say stuff he normally wouldn't, so thats when we had this conversation. Hints the title.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Inuhanyo

    Hey beautiful <3 I love you! I wroted a poem... I hope you like it D: It made me kinda scared to write it

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    I like the line:You said you'd say the same
    But the only thing
    People say a lot of things
    When they're going to extremes
    -i can't imagine having to cope with a b.f who unfortunatly has these problems,i'm sorry you have to deal with this,hope it gets better, i really like the title!

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Fascinating content.. Im glad you put the descrition at the end, it helped me understand it and probably saved me alot of time.

    I thought for the most part this piece was well written. It was a little confusing, but that could easily be made clearer.

    Well done,
    --Elly

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I definately get this one. The flow was a little rocky. But still enjoyable.

    "When there going to extremes"
    it should be
    "When they're going to extremes"

    just so you know.
    5/5

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