Lovely write.

The flow to this poem was AMAZING! The concept was great... and the word choice couldn't have been better. This was an enjoyable read :P 5/5 and it more than deserves it!

Wow, a lot poem that's NOT lacking emotion, amazing how hard it is to find those!
God job!!

Oh,so sweet,good job.
5/5!

Very nice! when i started reading, ithought it would be a sad poem but the ending really surprised me and made me smile. a nice way to express your feelings. wholly the poem is very light and flows good
5/5

I ADORE it!!!
i related 2 dis poem!!
but ma relationship turned out bad!!
yeah i no, dats sucks!!! = [[

Aww this was just so sweet to read that I could not help but smile at the happy ending. I loved the title because it caught my eye and made me eager to read more. The flow was great and this was short sweet and to the point which made it even more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

Love it, love it, love it
the emotion is so raw and I can honestly say I know exactly what you mean

Aw! I absolutely loved this! I thought it was very sweet, the way you described the relationship with the other person in the poem. The end surprised me, I wasn't expecting that. Great job.

5/5

-Briana