Great poem, mike. we need to get you to write something happy tho, hun!!!

This was a good poem, the flow was good and it was well expressed although the last line was a bit off but thats my opinion
great work :)

A good poem Mike, sad and full of feeling. 5/5

Wow that was written very well :]

Good emotional piece of writing.

Love it!

I Loved It!
I Was Honestly There From Beginning to End. Truly Magnificent.
I Loved it! =]
you've Got some talent there.
5/5

-Ally

Nice poem.
i like your structure.
and the order of the feelings.
you catch the emotion better that way.
great work.
-alicia.

Wow, just another amazing and a great poem
full of feeling .

"You were gone, I knew you were right
The darkness holds nothing
Nothing but fear
You hold everything, everything that's clear"

i like these lines are very expressive.

That wuz a really good poem. it shows ur emotions. good job :-D

I loved this. Every word of it; it almost brought me to tears. I can relate to this all too well. Keep up the great work=]

Alot of emotion in this poem sad but oh so good like you....i love your poems your so good at it with the words you use it jus makes em simply amazing like you....
Beautiful Job!!!
5/5

Beautiful writing yet so sad it deserves a 5 keep up the good work ^_^

Wow, i'm kinda speechless..
great job

Reflecting back on the good times and on the times you lost out. Good job, 5/5. Em x