Great ending... beautiful write...

Nice and mesmerising. I felt that it had a different style not in the form or the flow but in the meanings and the words. Personally I liked the last stanza the best - especially the last line - tis something unique! 5/5

Wow .....perfect poem ...your poem translates you true feelings .....actually outstanding ...

I lv it. Full of truth and meaning. Keep it up.

Wow. a lovely piece indeed! i can really relate to this.

Please my love, I need a break
Come back to me, please awake
I am drowning in my own fear's lake
Come back please for our love sake

i loved that stanza the most. you expressed yerself very well. keep up the lovely work! =]

Thats kindof how I'm feeling right now... On my profile it says I love to smile but... As of right now I think I might change it. Bit anyways that was a great poem.... I loved it!

Thats kindof how I'm feeling right now... On my profile it says I love to smile but... As of right now I think I might change it. Bit anyways that was a great poem.... I loved it!

Wonderful poem..so nicely described..
everything is so perfectly mentioned..i especially loved the second stanza.
thanks for sharing!