Our summer love

by Morgan   Feb 19, 2008


Our summer love didn't last to long
it drifted away like the leaves in the fall
and when it was over you moved away and i still can't get over you up till this day.

plez tell me what you think about my poem i know its not good but it says alot i feel

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  • 15 years ago

    by Taylor

    It's short, but I really like it:)
    good emotion.

  • 16 years ago

    by jennaleeexxx

    Even though it isn't the largest poem that I have ever read, it packs a lot of feelings in the small size. This is a great poem. I can't necessarily tell what you were thinking, but I believe that's what makes good poets.
    keep up the good work!
    jenna.

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Could be a bit longer, short yet nice <333

  • 16 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    I really like this poem. it shows what you are feeling in a way, and if you write your feelings, then it will be an awsome poem

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