GREAT poem. thanks for commenting on mine, as well!

Ha i love this

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Nice lol great job keep it up

I have nothing to say lol sorry could'nt
resist it. actually it had a ggod flow and kept
me iterested all the way to the end good
job

I like this one a lot, great job! i can kinda relate to that sometimes actually.

oh, thanks for commenting my poem btw, much appreciated :)

Amy x