Wow, that was beautiful! as I read it I felt like you were describing a doll. I really liked the flow

"Hush, Hush" simply amazing ;)

This is very original i like it a lot!

Echoes like a piece of music tuning for a little girl.

Beautiful. It sounds like a gentle melody. A Slow, divine lullaby. Very impressing. Great JoB!

~Hush, Hush~ A wonderful chant.

*Thanks for the comment on my poem*

5.5 Keep writing, kiddo!

It's true that the only thing one can do is just to walk away and say goodbye. It's lovely.

It's true that the only thing one can do is just to walk away and say goodbye. It's lovely.

Ayee...!
I really like this one
great job on it
5/5 =]
Keep up the good work!!