I like it.
It flowed well and th wording was good.

"Killing my slowly."
I think thats suppose to be me.

Keep it up 5/5

I like it. Your poems have a really good flow to them. You're good with words. :]

Very nicely written piece. .
I like the structure you used for this piece and the wayy you wrote/worded everything. It's.. unique. :] Your desrciptions were good and your emotion were expressed nicely. A great write. 5/5.

I really enjoyed ths senual poem and i would not change a thing about it