"But the thought of you linger" should be an 's' on the end of linger.

"It is not something I usually do" from the lines before this, this line threw me off the course of the poem

... all i really think this poem needs is punctuation. there was a point where i never used it in my poetry, but i came to realize when you add it in, the reader pauses where you want them to. It breaks the words up and allows a poem to flow easier then it does without. try reading a poem with puncation. then read it again without any pauses where there would be a '' ; , or . ... ect.

other then that this was a good read, keep up the great work!

--Terra

I love the richness in the voice of the poem, your work is simplicity rich and moves the reader without them knowing they started to move. thank you.

Its amazing u defintly got talent

Awww sweet iloveit

I truly love this one a lot :) 5/5

This poem is full of life..i love the message and the flow of words.. well written..very good