Im sorry

by Ashley   Feb 23, 2008


I couldnt wait much longer
i couldnt hold on
i couldnt wait for you
to finally like me
so i tried to get over you
but dreams filled my mind
that night i dreamed that you
were next to me holding my hand
whispering in my ear
"i love..."
but i woke to find myself alone
in my dark room
over heating under my blanket
still thinking of you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Hum not much to say about it other than you give it all to us plan and simple you should write it longer and harder to understand but give us little peices to clue it all together or just keep it short but use bigger and better descriptive words...mine is not the best either but we both still have time to grow as a writer...