Very nice poem and well done work

Wow thats really imaginative! and ur head had fille w/ nice and emotional thoughts! great job 5/5

Thanks alot u realy gives me big smile in my face now i wish to be better

Little long... But Still Fair... I mean that it's nice poem

Wow, this poem was very descriptive! The flow was good, the word choice was decent, and the concept was great! 5/5

I didn't like this poem very much. I was thrown off by the slang and improper grammar. The idea was good, you just need to wield it into something more poetic.

This poem is really wonderful and so great and I can feel your deep love.