Wow....this poem was very powerful in emotions and anger at life.....its sad though....i hope you'll be okay Kortney, good poem though.

Kyle Bleeding <3

Definitely a powerful poem full of emotions. mostly anger. but with each hardship we have to push forward. each hardship only makes us appreciate happyness that much more.

Very powerful poem and very touching. I had a dream about this last night, even though i read it today. Good poem 5/5.

Take care,

-Sarah A.

Oh my girly...dont do that...

Its true life sucks and we are all alone. I agree it sucks that sometimes the only way to get these feelings out in the open is to cut them out either for real or just in our dreams!

Very strong words, 5/5

This is a very strong poem! but i can relate! i hate life too and i've slit my wrist and watch the blood poor down my arms and in the tub somethines i wanted to die you just got to hang on to something weather its there on not!!

I like the emotion in this poem..although there really was no structure it still came across nicely..good job :D

<3 XxBeautifulMistakexX

That was awesome...I loved the poem so much..it was so touchable and sad...I'm sorry that u feel like that..
Good job,keep it up:)..

Graphic...I LOVED IT!!

God! damn! i could actually see everything going on while i was reading it. the words were very powerful indeed. hate in the words made it more stronger n anger. i love it but dnt do this please. okay!? good! hehe.. love it. amazing job once again.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

That was epic! heehee
i loved it!
it was full of emotions. :)