Comments : This is me

  • 16 years ago

    by devils angel sunrise

    Yes i can still be in love with you

  • 16 years ago

    by Daz Mellow

    Aw, this is sweet.
    and it made me smile.
    haven't done that in a while. :)
    I'd rather be your friend than your enemy,
    since more beneficial for both you and me.

    okay okay, enough rhyming. gawd that poem, got me into a rhyming trance haha

    this great, happy-ish and really colorful (to me anyways) and it's cute

    kudos!!!

    ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Munequita

    I like dis poem i can relate 2 it...gd work

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt L

    Don't know about loving you but I love your poem

    Haha but seriously its straight from the heart!

    Keep on writing

    Matt

  • 16 years ago

    by Morgan

    I like that poem its so true and its great you show your real colors.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Thats cute...so innocent like and mellow, liked it! =)

  • 16 years ago

    by SADADDY

    This is a wonderful piece of work, you have expressed yourself very well in this write. May peace and joy fill your heart each and everyday.

    sadaddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    It's Tuesday morning and I think someone just cheered me up more than my cup of coffee. ;D 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Wow that was amazing....good point-excellent poem

  • 16 years ago

    by RB

    Oh i like this a lot. rly puts urself out there. so honest. so true. did u actually tell or show the person this? i hope you did. nice write :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandy

    Wow right poem at the right time, this fit to a tee everything I felt insode, loved it, thanks for sharing