Nicely written.

This is done so well....the feeling and human thought.......I love it............

This is amazing.... I felt tears in my eyes forming! I love your work, theyre so full of emotion. Keep it up :]

It's so powerful..it made me cry..i know the feeling...i din't precisly lose my dad.but he cheated on my mom...and left us..he expects me to love him like if he didn't hurt me...the way i see it...he's only my biological dad..but he's really nothing else

Aww...that was so sad but so cute! i am sure she was so thankful for this ! 5/5 <33

I read this and still i get more out of it everytime.....your simply amaxing ......but you knew that too....xoxo

*BEAUTIFUL* I love it

This is lovely!

Amazing. purly amazing. keep it up.

Heartfelt expression, your daddy would be very pleased.

Great poem, really sad but you captured alot of emotion in it

A powerful poem.. sad though but very powerful

This is really really sad!
I'm sure your friend appreciated it!
i like the perspective of the little girl-it helps.

Lovely poem...I feel like I know the little girl by the end.
Keep writing!
Take care,
Ignoris

Wow, this sent goosebumps up my spine, a lot of poems don't usually
very well done
5/5