Comments : Searching for him

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    WOOOW
    i really really loved poem, you don't know how much it affected me
    it had a big impact on me

    well done and keep writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Matt L

    That last line "Is he gone? Or is he coming back someday?" finishes it off perfectly

    Love the poem and thank you for the comment!

    Keep on writing

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Awesome poem. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Ahhhhh i love it! U r so AmAzInG!

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    I really love this poem, it almost made me cry............. If feel the same exact way.

  • 16 years ago

    by Heather

    PERFECT POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    That is so sad not knowing if he was coming back of if he is not. Great poem. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Wow, simply brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this. It was kinda sad though....good flow too

  • 16 years ago

    by Freedom

    Raelly touchin poem :)))) i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Madison

    Chill verse

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very dramatic poem ;)
    keep up the good work.
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

    Oh thats very very deep

  • 16 years ago

    by maEve may

    ..so nice!5/5..^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Brill poem!
    Love the way you wrote it :)
    Hope you do find the right boy one day!
    5/5
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    So pretty

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharr

    5/5

    That Is A Wonderful Poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Good question.! Marvellous

  • 16 years ago

    by Ronny

    Aaw Rly nice poem =))

  • 16 years ago

    by zaheer

    Hey this is such a heart-felt poem