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WOOOW |
by Matt L
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That last line "Is he gone? Or is he coming back someday?" finishes it off perfectly |
by JEFF
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Awesome poem. 5/5 |
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Ahhhhh i love it! U r so AmAzInG! |
by Heather
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I really love this poem, it almost made me cry............. If feel the same exact way. |
by Heather
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PERFECT POEM |
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Great write great flow and great emotion keep it up |
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That is so sad not knowing if he was coming back of if he is not. Great poem. =) |
by Mello193
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Wow, simply brilliant. I really enjoyed reading this. It was kinda sad though....good flow too |
by Freedom
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Raelly touchin poem :)))) i loved it |
by Madison
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Chill verse |
by Cyma Khan
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Very dramatic poem ;) |
by MEMI
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Oh thats very very deep |
by maEve may
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..so nice!5/5..^_^ |
by Andy
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Brill poem! |
by Alexandraa
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So pretty |
by Sharr
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5/5 |
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Good question.! Marvellous |
by Ronny
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Aaw Rly nice poem =)) |
by zaheer
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Hey this is such a heart-felt poem |