Catchy, simple and beautiful. You never strayed from the topic and each line drew me in deeper and deeper. 5/5

I liketh this part "My fears will come out, everyone will know
I'll be dying like a rose whose color won't show
My heart is already falling apart
I feel it coming my tears are about to start" it really just kinds hit home for me this time 5/5

My head is telling me I need to be strong
But my heart is saying that's completely wrong
i realy love this part i always find my head telling me things and my heart not agree
nice work