Comments : Consequence of Shattered Innocence

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Wow...
    this is really really really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    I like the way you write, great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    Anquish is evident and silent

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. that is sooo sad....the emotions come through strongly, the sadness, the guilt, the shame....wow.

    Pasts that still haunt,
    Both at day and by night,
    Lives forever altered,
    By something far from right.

    ^ definitely my favorite stanza....

    keep up the amazingrificsplendiforimatic work. ^_^

    (this shows you're worth something, hun)

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. that is sooo sad....the emotions come through strongly, the sadness, the guilt, the shame....wow.

    Pasts that still haunt,
    Both at day and by night,
    Lives forever altered,
    By something far from right.

    ^ definitely my favorite stanza....

    keep up the amazingrificsplendiforimatic work. ^_^

    (this shows you're worth something, hun)

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    U r talented..The poem is stunning,I did like the way u wrote it so muchhhhhh...keep it up5/5