All i can say is wow!! i loved it, this was really deep. u have an amazing talent u should keep writing! dont ever stop! i know that breakups are the worst, jus remember there will always be someone better..

Woww.. this is amazing and very very deep.. the last line was a perfect way to end it and left me just speechless.. very very nicely written and very powerful!.. great poem.. keep it up =)

WOW
Very expressive. I loved your word usage in this. made the poem very descriptive in its meaning.
5/5
nuff said!

This was a very well-written poem! The flow was good, the word choice was great, and the concept was brilliant. Although I don't like cutting poems :P

This was really beautiful, I really liked the details of the poem, and it flowed perfectly! The rhyming was effortless, you hardly even noticed it rhymed at all because the words just flowed so smoothly.
5/5
~gabriella

This poem tells a lot about how you feel. It's well written, sad, & sweet... keep writing 5/5

This poem was amazingly written... the way it managed to portray your feelings is astonishing. The concept was great as well... I really enjoyed reading this poem. 5/5

Sweet!

Wow - I almost cried.
You use exellent detail.
5/5

*Good job*

Wow the imagery is great you can really feel the emotions. Great poem 5/5

Wow! great job, very emotional, you portrayed your feeling very well
well done

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Imagery is fantatic :]
emotional
very detailed.
love the vocabulary

8/10

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Nice choice of words... very well described...
good imagination...

overall a great write...

B-rilliant word choice
E-xcellent flow
A-mazing imagery
U-nbelievable title
T-errific rhyme scheme
I-couldnt do better
F-uck you for doing better than me =P
U-gh, I forgive you. You rock my socks.
L-ove you forever ^^

Amaaazing !! Simply great .. The flow .. The rythmes .. The deep emotion behund each and every word ..
Keep it up
5/5