Apparently you really love this girl! No doubt about it.
The rhyming technique went well with the flow, so can't complain about that.

"I hold you to sleep, and listen to you breathe,
I hold you in my arms and cannot believe,
The burning sensation flowing inside,
Coursing through my body, nothing can hide,"

That was my favorite part.
You can definately feel ever fiber of love you feel from each line in this poem.
5/5

Strong love, nice poem. I wondered who is Amira? XD

Waw sooooooo nice i love it alot u realy have a big love thats what i can see

I love this poem..

the rythem is really good and i love the format

This was a very sweet and touching poem. It describes a beautiful love, and whoever you wrote this poem to or for must be pretty happy about it, I know I would be. [: 5/5

Romanctic... Yes, really

I have a guy in my life who makes me feel the same and helps me to be more than ordinary with everything..adorable<33