This is good. translation makes it extremely interesting. good job

WOW I HAVE BEEN THE OTHER WOMEN BEFORE. SO TRUE I LIKE HOW YOUR WORDS FLOWED.

Pretty good poem it did rhymed and you got to the point. thanx for the comment you put in my poem " i have latina spice" well written poem

Haha....i think the one in spanish is more powerful, and makes more sence then the one in english..i think it has a greater power in spanish.

but thats just me ;)

great job!
Aly

Te entiendo mija. Yo asi estoy ahorita! Buen poema. no pares de escribir.
-Stephanie

Great poems, love it lol
very talented