THAT WAS AWESOME!! ^-^

Great poem.
really deep and meaningful.

Love it.
The emotion was shown and the flow was flawless.

"Has fcuked up my whole life"
I would change 'fcuked' because even though you have changed the spelling its still against the rules. Either change it or move it to explicit. But its your choice.

Otherthan that, it was excellent. 5/5

Nice. ^_^ I quite enjoyed this poem. I like the no more playing nice rhyme the best along with the very last just watch line. Great work. Short yet sweet. A five from me.

I love the character portray in here a very determined and a powerful man wanting and ready to strife.. great one, it was flawless

Now this is rockin piece *especailly when ur already fueling off some anger* great piece - randrops 5/5

Super good.......5/5 =)