Comments : Hurting Me-- Killing Me.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    This is a situation that i have gone through like many of us have before. Thank you for making the memory, eventhough it's painful, relive and last forever. respect

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I really liked this.. the only problem that I seen was this line...

    "I hate to think you're just like them
    Because you're different as from what I can see."

    Something about it is off.. I think that you added "as" and it's really does not sound right in that sentence. Other then that I found no problems. I can compleatly relate to this also. and that's always good. flow was almost perfect. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Clean language... nice words... Good poem