Fair and nice poem... You wirte really nice...

"Someone will hurt you,
The way you hurt me.
And there won't be a way back,
Because that's destiny."

WOW. That was the best stanza out of the whole thing. It really got to me, I had serious goosebumps!!

Your poem was beautiful. I honestly did not find any flaws in it whatsoever. If I could critique it at all, I would want it to go on for a little longer, but I know that it would probably ruin it considering what your last line says.

I can honestly relate to this poem as well. I had a boyfriend who did the same thing to me. So...terrible.

Awesome poem! You're an amazing writer

5/5

The poem and emotion itself is really good.
But, there were parts, like for instance . . the first stanza :

"You don't know what love really is,
That is why you hurt everything.
You take love as an advantage,
That love I give you."

The flow is a bit off in this, and when I took like " that is" and made it that's and a few other places like such - it just had a better flow, I'm not quite sure why, because a lot of of times when you break them up it gives more emphasis to it and whatnot, but with this it didn't.

The poem is great though, don't get me wrong.
And, even though I'm not the best " critic " nor the best writer, if you'd like me to break it down stanza by stanza and let you know things that may seem better, in my opinion - I'd be glad to. I just think it needs a bit of tweaking to it. (:

But, it's your work - and you did a great job with it.

Waw , i read it allll so romantic, realy you got big heart and true love , i feel it now

First I would like to say, this was very sad. I have felt similar emotions before and so this poem was probably able to captivate me so easily because of that.
I have found nothing negative to say about this poem, so I will only say good job.

The last part was the best, all of it was great, you could feel the sadness, but also the anger in this poem, great job

I wonder who you wrote this one for. I like it though baby!