by Sumit Ojha
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Good work... Nice poem... 5/5 |
by noha
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Nice work i love the feeling u hide, and i love the part saying |
by Shinobi
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This poem is really sweat. The structure is built nicely, but I still find some things not in order. There are no rhymes. You repeat "you" at the end of every line in the third stanza and repeat "me" at the end of every line in the fourth stanza, besides the last line. This repeatance breaks the flow a bit. Although that, a nice poem 4/5 |
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Hey, you wrote this for Mara, huh!? Damn, why did that crazy girl have to leave! Lol! |