Comments : I Wish You Knew This Song Was About You

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Good work... Nice poem... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    Nice work i love the feeling u hide, and i love the part saying
    All I ask for is to believe me,
    Trust me and support me.
    God up above blesses me,
    I just wish you knew this song is for you.

    If only you knew,
    What I feel for you,
    What I would do for you.
    I do this for you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is really sweat. The structure is built nicely, but I still find some things not in order. There are no rhymes. You repeat "you" at the end of every line in the third stanza and repeat "me" at the end of every line in the fourth stanza, besides the last line. This repeatance breaks the flow a bit. Although that, a nice poem 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Hey, you wrote this for Mara, huh!? Damn, why did that crazy girl have to leave! Lol!
    I love you babe!