O my goodness i am crying i hope you know christ***if that is rude i am so sorry*** you are so special when you write i cant believe that i am so sorry. if you would send me a message that would be aewsome

God bless you and your family
sydney

Well done, th wording is factastic, i feel that i can really relate, unfortunately i kno exactly how u feel..
Great poem overall though
keep up th good work

Really awesome

Im srry for your dad... i love this poem. alot! :] hehe. its really great!

Almost to perfection, very nice.

It was very good keep the work up.