Comments : Abstract lovely

  • 16 years ago

    by pixie

    Loved it. ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Hmm, that was very beatifu, you definatley have a gift with words. I found no flaws that I could see, they're probably were some, don't get me wrong, but every poem and every-thing in life isn't without its flaws... great job, it was once again really great.

    yours truly
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    Woooooooooow
    thats a great one
    keep it up

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    I know this feeling! I just never dared to say I sometimes felt like that in my relationship, that ended a month ago..Even though you love someone, that person can still make you feel, like.. sh*t. xD
    Anyway, lovely poem, nice choice of words and I can totally relate.
    5/5
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by c 0 n f u s e d

    All i can say is WoW!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nikkicola

    Wow I needed to read this. I'm having a crappy day and this helped. Thank you for writing this. :-) 5/5