I'm speechless!!!! and thats a good thing. wow

This was AMAZING!
<3

*Excellent*

I really liked this part wear you express everything.

"Licking, teasing, kissing
Touching, holding, feeling
Needing, hoping, pleading
Sends both our heads reeling"

Nice! THAT was good!

Damn! I've got to stop reading these at work, can't concentrate on anything now lol. 5/5

Ya know sweetie...when I said you were being too graphic in your writing before...I didn't mean you had to clean it up this much! I like it when you talk dirty lol. Seriously though...expressing yourself so well without the profanity shows how much you've matured as a writer. Great job! And yes...you do leave me with a big smile on my face :)

Wow...loved it, romantically erotic no too much detail but enough! keep it up

Wow. youve got talent; definitly love it.

Great job again hun! Takes me back to that night I earned the A+, and of course the Truth or Dare part of Dani's birthday party. People who say he never smiles haven't seen him when we're working on him have they lol