Wow, I ****ing love this poem so much! It's very rare, at least in my experience, to hear a guy open up about his feelings. This is so good, because a lot of people can relate to it, and it definitely shows emotion. Great job! 5/5 :) Katie

No rhythm, and the title seems a little over zealous for the package to be honest

It's ok, needs puncuation. The flow is good as well as the structure. Emotion within is shown very good, but I feel it is a very Cliche write (sp?) Overall it's just ok, could be better.

Peace, Joe

I like it!

This is soo cute

I know u feel =, (.....it really cute...5/5

You have a crazyy style that i've never seen before. i like it though. it's good.

but in response to "broken hands", i think the title is fine because that's exactly what the poem is about. Title = couple word description of whatever (poem, story, etc.)
thats exactly what it is.

anyways. crazy good poem. i like it. =)