Nice one i love it , its great u have sch feeling , keep ur work up

I love this poem. it shows feeling && i like that what you end with is what you start with in the next line.
its really good. =]

Aww.. I know how it is to miss someone that much. I think you did a really great job describing how you feel. I like the style you wrote it in too, it was interesting. Great job!

Cayce xx

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I love this poem...it's deep and full of emotions...