LOL, This was hilarious, I loved the idea of the soda brands in there. Some of them I havent heard before but some of them I have. I liked how it all made sense and you woved the stoy with the soda brands. CUte poem 5/5
Clever haha, I especially like the rhyming. I'd never think to write a poem using names of drinks and if I did I'd probably dismiss it right away. But I really enjoyed reading this, brought a smile to my face. 5/5
Haha whatta refreshing piece to read after a long day which just made me smile. It shows how much thought you put into it and the flow was clear and flawless. You told a great story and fit everything in perfectly.. Well done *5/5*
Ha this poem wasn't like funny like balling on the floor but some laughs emerged from under me and i thought it was clever of you to use a bunch of different soda labels to write a poem so yeah great job 5/5
Wow this was very good.. I really liked the idea of using the differnt types of soft drink names in a poem, thats very original.. and the fact that you managed to turn it into a story is just that much better. I've hardly heard of any of these so my curiosity got the best of me. Very original, and a very creative title. It also made me laugh cause the idea was so brilliant. I think that I really liked this though because it reminds me of something that you have to do when you're little.It comes witht that innocence but with the flair and prefection of a vetrined poet. Well done. You have a tallent well beyond your years.