HUh... Good poem... I like it :)

Awww. This was a very sweet and touching poem. I absolutely loved it. There were no flow errors in this poem, and everything was so beautifully penned! Keep up the amazing work! 5/5

This is such a sweet poem. I absolutely loved it. I can feel every word of love you're writing about. I especially loved the 3rd stanza. To me, it showed a lot. Great job!!

.:CiNdY:.

Your choice of words is amazing, the imagery and description within each word gives this poem a greater meaning, well done. keep writing. :)

5/5 David

You have a talent, your way of describing the feeling of love shocked me, it was amazing, your touch and tenderness was uncanny, well done and continue to write. :)

5/5 David