It's a good poem. Great job Deb!!

All i can say is WOW

This poem is perfect it really sounds like a professional poems and could be mistaken for a famous classic keep it up

Wow...
Wow...

This is simply amazing from the first to the last line. I am truly speechless.

Your choice of words is superb and the atmosphere that you created is breathtaking. You did great job with rhymes, too and created flawless flow in each stanza.
I can't express how deeply this poem touched me. It holds simple yet endlessly captivating beauty in every priceless line.
Amazingly done.
I can't chose my favorite part, every stanza is fantastic.
Keep writing!

Very nice, very nice indeed

Well! I think you're wonderful
I don't think your poem is dull either!!!
Some just would not know perfection if it smacked them in the face....still you have to be kind to the blind as my Pa always said

You are.....
Poem was just wonderful!!!

I didn't really like what was being said, but the words and rhymes themselves were great. I espcially liked the part about force-feeding the night.

Brad

Good write, i really enjoyed the rhyming. it was a well thought poem.