Comments : The End

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, wonderful written and nice flow. i love it alot and i can feel your pain.

    i hope things are better now

  • 16 years ago

    by Fran

    Such raw emotion. You've definitely captured the misery, hurt and confusion of a broken relationship. I hope life is a little more peaceful now.

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Just blew away your poems are just amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Thats very nice, emotions are expressed well, i enjoyed it, nice work

  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    That was both beautiful and sad,
    haven't read your poems in a while,
    and this one is so well written and so
    amazingly put. Defanitly a 5/5.
    Maybe, if you had the time, you could
    read some of my poems, again awsome job!

    -mandy <3