Comments : When Green Goes Grey

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I have seen the green go gray I'm afraid. Not as pretty sight. your words have started to fill in the verde again. nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I loved this part:

    "Hoarding the summer air
    I pace my run down the forest path
    Freedom without a care
    Releases internal wrath"

    Nicely written, I don't want to see that day either. Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I remember this one too!!! i like it bunches and bunches. you're pretty talented.